Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Deterrence for sex offenders (essay 2 roughdraft)

Nancy was raped by her stepfather for 5 long years. She was his second prey. Nancy’s stepfather was a registered sex offender when he decided to become “weak” according to her. “If they knew he was capable of committing another crime, why did they release him?” Nancy said referring to the court of justice. Individuals are debating the delicate balance between individual rights and public safety, when it comes to housing sex offenders. About 27 states have enacted legislation that forces serial sex offenders to register with local law enforcement agencies upon moving into a community and Washington State is one of them. In this country safe housing can be a privilege but to what extent can that privilege be given to sex predators? I strongly believe sex predators have the right to safe housing but with limits. Depending on where their crime stands and why the crime was committed in the first place. If the sex offender committed the crime due to a mental illness he/she should be placed in a mental institute. If not the only other place for that offender is prison for life. I definitely consider prison and mental institutes safe housing for these predators. Having these predators released and thrown out to the communities would be risking more children. Laws against sexual offenders should be harshly enforced to the fullest extent to prevent reoffends. Most of these sex cons desperately wait their release just to commit an even more horrific crime.

I read an article about a detective named Glenn Quantz of the Thurston County Sheriff’s Office who believes sex cons are the most manipulative of criminals and will most likely reoffend. Quantz came across a sex offender named Leroy David Fulton, a guy who was sentenced to three life sentences for raping young boys but only served 10 years in jail. Fulton got his master’s degree in psychology while he was in prison and was extraordinary. Fulton’s therapist had stated “I don’t think of Fulton as a client, I think of him as a co therapist.” “This guy is dangerous, and his reoffend cycle says he should be offending right now.” When Fulton was released he was exposed to the community. He was a registered sex offender but that did not stop him from “hunting his prey.” Detective Quantz soon found out Fulton had joined an astronomy club where he befriended two families with children and had already been giving the kids gifts. To me this is a clear example of why I believe sex offenders should be in prison for life or in a mental institute. I do not think there is any other way for it. Now does this clash with the sex offender’s individual rights? Not so much because they had a choice either comply with the laws and have his/her rights respected or break the law and loose that right. The choice was theirs to make and they made it by committing the crime. They still have their right to safe housing maybe not in the way they would like to but better than living under a bridge or roaming in our neighborhoods endangering our children. What is the best solution? A life sentence is a possible deterrence.

Supporters to this idea believe lengthy mandatory prison sentences would deter repeat child sex offenders. But there are those who oppose to such thing. An article in the Houston Chronicle in 2007 stated that some opponents agreed that lengthy sentences would prompt prosecutors to charge offenders with lesser crimes and would deter families from reporting child sexual abuse. It also stated that predators might be more likely to kill their victims to silence them. I see the opponents point but I do not agree with this because lengthy sentences might not stop sexual abuse but will deter sexual abuse offenders. As for short sentences, this will also not stop sexual abuse but will allow for offenders to commit a crime again because they know they will be released sooner rather than later. This allows them to plot their next crime. As for if they are incarcerated for life or in a mental institute they will not have the slight chance to commit another crime. An article I found in the CQ Researcher online talks about a Washington State resident in the late 1980s named Earl Shriner who was a sexual predator.

Earl Shriner had a 24 year history of sexual violence and had spent a decade in prison after kidnapping and raping two 16 –year-old girls. Shortly before he was scheduled to be released from a Washington state prison in 1988, prison officials came across a dilemma. Shriner had drawn pictures and written in his diary about torturing children once he was free. As awful as this looks nothing was done in regards to this because he had already served his time. Shortly after Shriner was released he raped, stabbed, and sexually mutilated a 7 year old boy, who survived the attack and was able to identify his aggressor. It is ridiculous how many children have to go through such a nightmare in order for the law to finally put a sex con in prison. I really believe the only way to decrease sexual crimes and properly place sexual offenders in a safe housing environment for them and ourselves is prison or mental institutes. It cannot be said that these sex cons housing rights are being taken away from them, but it can be said that they have been modified. With every right we also have a choice to either keep our right or lose it. These sex offenders made the choice to possibly lose their right to live in a normal setting. Therefore, they should not be given a second chance and should be incarcerated for life. The victim’s where not given a second chance when they were living such awfull crime, then why should the offenders?


links: Nancy V. (friend/victim)
R.G. Ratcliffe (Houston Chronicle 2007)
Congressional Quarterly 16 (2006)
Congressional Quarterly 6 (1996)


7 comments:

Kramer said...

I really like your essay it plays the feelings of the reader very well. But while reading I can't help wondering what is your standpoint on other kinds of sexual offenders? Do men who expose themselves to someone deserve a life sentance? or what about someone who has concensual sex with an underage partner?

Terri08 said...

You speak to the thoughts of many who do not want sexual predators in the community. With the increase number of sex offenders today who will pay to keep them locked up. I like your topic. Lots of information given. You have a strong voice.

Myskulklass said...

Your eassy is great. i like the way you have incorporatd your voice with what others say

Michael Oliver said...

I think your essay is a winner. You might want to read it a couple of times to really see how it flows to you. I think that a couple of paragraphs(topics) were mixed up. But you have the essay done... Maybe just needs a queak here & there.

winter said...

"he decided to become “weak” according to her" this I'm really confused about. who is he? and what do you mean by weak. Your not clear on this sentence and your not clear on where you stand in your intro. Also I believe it is on your second paragraph that you mention. sex offenders waiting to get out of jail to commit the same crime again? how do you know that? base on assumption? once again not clear.

Amit V. said...

Well written. You did a great job explaining what you think is incorrect with some of the laws in place for sex offenders. In the very beginning you might want to tell more about Nancy, who she is and why she waited 5 years to report the crime.

Craig McKenney said...

Good attention getter...but the title still needs some work.

Avoid use of "I read an article" or "In my essay" etc...makes it sounds like a class assignment as opposed to something that could stand on its own in the real world.

Good length...you are developing your ideas well.

Make sure your voice is in each topic sentence.